Poetry Talk

Thank you for sharing your poem with me.  There are some very good moments in your poem and you have managed to convey the strong feelings you have.  There is, for me, a bit of confusion with the language at times.

They stick a firm reason for the nip to go beyond a rampage

And catch and catch

I am a bit confused by these lines and wonder if it might be a translation issue.  In any event, your poem is filled with passion and purpose and that, is the heart of poetry.  Your friend in poetry, Susan