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July 14, 2021 at 8:42 pm
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Keymaster
There are some very strong images in your poem. I particularly liked “Till your begging to be released from the prison of my mind/out in the form of beautiful words.” I also very much like “the thunder of your footfall.” I’m a little less sure of “chock-full” as it somehow seems out of place. Well conceived, well written, emotionally charged poem! Thank you so much for sharing with me. I will definitely consider your poem to be featured in a future poetladykatz Instagram post. Your friend in poetry, Susan

