Poetry Talk

Thank you for sharing your poem with me.  I very much like “there’s no rose without a thorn” – it gives us something meaningful in the way of an image that we can relate to.  There are a number of grammatical missteps but, a bit of editing could correct that.  I will admit there are some lines I simply don’t understand and that may simply be a translation issue.  In any event, you have definitely captured a mood in your poem and that’s a big part of what poetry is all about.  – Susan