Poetry Talk

I can feel the love and the admiration that someone in your life, inspired.  What I would have liked to have seen more of, are the techniques that make a poem, a poem.  I would have liked to have seen imagery (metaphor and simile) interesting line breaks and perhaps, a bit of alliteration.  Your message is strong and clear and well said – now, you may want to craft this piece into a poem that makes us feel what you feel and know what you know.  Thank you so very much for sharing your work with me, Susan