Poetry Talk

Thank you for sharing your very emotional poem with me.  You have some very good lines and state your passion with energy and intensity.  I very much liked the way you expressed how life is treating you “They want to turn me into ashes….
They wanted to buried me alive….” and still you manage to hold on to hope that things will turn around, that the “boat of life” will “return.”  This poem is too long for me to feature on my Instagram page but, I do congratulate you on your effort and encourage you to spend a little time on brushing up your English grammar.  I think the poem would benefit greatly from that.    I would also encourage you to Keep On Writing!  Your friend in poetry, Susan