Poetry Talk

Thank you Candice for sending again.  I think this work well.  I wonder if you have ever thought about “line break.”  For example – instead of having your rhymes come at the end of each line – how about trying this…

Dreams within hoping

to be true reaching the skies

so blue      the reason

for this is the secret

of bliss.

I do think this helps make the poem more intriguing and invites the reader to move from line to line.  It’s something to think about.  Once again, thank you so much for being a part of Poet Lady Katz.  Have a wonderful rest of your day, Susan