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November 3, 2021 at 12:50 pm
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Susan KatzKeymaster
What a lovely idea to bring your “shadow” to life and give it real and meaningful qualities. May I make a couple off suggestions as pertains to English grammar.
“Sometimes you’re forward to me” should be, “sometimes you’re ahead of me…” and
“What not you do” should be “what don’t you do…”
I am very happy to consider your poem for Featured Poem of the Month for December. If it is chosen, I would request that the corrections to the grammar be applied to the poem.
Thank you so much for submitting your work and thank you for being a fellow poet,
Susan