Poetry Talk

Thank you so much for submitting this extremely well written poem.  I am impressed with the way you made “mosaic” the image that carried your thoughts and feelings, throughout the poem, and became the final “exclamation point” at the end of the poem.  You have a lovely rhythm and, though I might have of hoped for a little less emphasis on rhyme,” a finely crafted poem.  I will be considering it for Featured Poem of the Month for December.  Your friend in poetry, Susan