Poetry Talk

Thank you for sharing this poem with such a fine message of achieving a sense of self worth and self esteem.  You message is right on, however, I think you need to spend some time working on your lines and trying to craft them into lines of poetry rather than lines that offer a very important message.  Poetry is all about imagery and emotion.  Imagery should spark the emotion.  What is an image for the “good you” for a “struggler” for “inspiration from other’s work?”  Perhaps it would be helpful to read some English poets and see how they offer their messages through poetry.  I do believe the emotion and the honesty that is reflected in your poem.

I will be considering your poem for Featured Poem of the Month for December and, thank you for your interest in https://www.poetladykatz.com  Your friend in poetry, Susan