Poetry Talk

What a lovely and joyful poem, showing us, not only your writing skills, but your personal ability to speak your joy.  Thank you so much for submitting your poem for consideration for Featured Poem of the Month for December. 

I like that you have used imagery (As we bind together like raindrops becoming one with the sea…) – very nice – would love to have seen an image for “shattered” like/into???  Nobody should ever be as critical of a poem, as the poet who wrote it.  I often go back a dozen or more times, changing a word here – then putting it back the way it was – seeking a stronger image and looking for ways to make my poem the best it can be.  The work of the poet – editing!

Your friend in poetry, Susan