Poetry Talk

Thank you for submitting this very interesting and lyrical poem.  You have chosen to write in an “old English” style that is both appealing and challenging, for the reader.  I will admit to having some trouble, at times, understanding exactly what you were trying to say but, your rhythms work very well and there is something truly inviting about your work.  I very much appreciate you sharing your poem with me.  Your friend in poetry, Susan