Poetry Talk

Another beautiful poem.  One suggestion – either “streams sway or stream sways” would be grammatically correct.  I love the progression of the poem and your ending – lovely, lyrical, and beautifully written.  I keep looking at your painting on our wall and saying to my husband, “You can’t believe how multi-talented this lady is.”  Truly, I am so impressed with your ability to “speak” through your paintings and your poetry.  You are a very gifted lady and I am so happy to have gotten to know you.

Susan