Poetry Talk

How very romantic, and how sad, your poem is.  You have so much emotion and genuine feeling in your poem that we are compelled to experience your feelings.  That is what poetry should do – include the reader in the emotions of the poem.  There are, as you may know, some grammatical errors that interfere a little with the flow of the poem.  However, writing poetry, in a second language, is truly impressive.  Thank you so very much for sharing your work with me.  Your Friend in Poetry,

Susan