Poetry Talk

Thank you for sharing.  This is a powerful poem with some really wonderful moments.  I do think that the emotion, the sensibility you are trying to share, comes through beautifully.  I don’t have the time today, but would love to make some editing suggestions – point out a couple of typos – and, perhaps, once the poem finds its final self, publish it on a “Poem of the Week” post, after the New Year.  Also, it would be helpful, if you would resend to poetlady@earthlink.net and put in your own email address (which will remain private – if you only send as an email) so that I am reminded to work on it and, we have an easy back and forth conversation.

This is really good work.  Have a beautiful, creative day.  Your friend in poetry, Susan