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February 4, 2023 at 3:27 pm
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Keymaster
Thank you so much for sharing your poetry with me. I will respond to each poem, individually. There are some lovely moments in this poem and, the intensity of your message shines through. Just a couple of things to consider… in poetry, “less is more” and, simple words seem to work better than “grand” ones. Having said that, I feel the emotion and I am moved by your words. – Susan

