Poetry Talk

I think I made the changes you recommended. Is this what you meant?

Love is the Aftermath of Storm

Love is
You holding me tight after my tears have abated
The sky stops crying and the wind stops
When the earth is moist and green
It’s silence softly soothing the stricken scene
It needs no words to heal the heart
Love is the aftermath of the storm

Thanks so much for your feedback! I’ll continue to work on the things you mentioned.