Poetry Talk

Delightful poem.  I very much like the way you “personalize” smiles – giving them a personality.  I particularly like the imagery in this stanza. 

I know an independent person

Who beautifully expands her cheeks,

Like a group of fireflies

Permeating golden glow,

Wide curves along lips

Breath taking indeed!

As always, I truly appreciate you sharing your work with me.  Have a beautiful day!!! – Susan