Reply To: Why to crawl?

[Susan Katz]

Many thanks for submitting your poem for consideration for next week’s Featured Poem of the Week.  I like the way you have contained your message in just these very few lines.  I like the way your poem begins and I like how you take it simply, clearly to a place where wings, rising above, is the answer.  I respect that English may not be your first language and so there are some moments when the poem strays because of language, but it is beautifully conceived and I truly applaud you for a job well done.  Have a very creative day, Susan