Reply To: Martand

[Susan Katz]

Thank you so much for sharing this lovely poem with me.  There is so much love and joy in your poem and you have some very beautiful images as well.  I would like to suggest that you don’t work so hard on rhyming, your poetry would stand out even more if you concentrated on your beautiful and meaningful images.  I am happy to consider your poem for Featured Poem of the Month for June.  Keep writing – you have talent, Susan