Reply To: What this World is Like !

[Susan Katz]

Thank you for sharing your philosophical poem with me.  I very much like the tone of your poem, but fear there are some issues with translation into English.  Some of the lines tend to be confusing and do not really say what I believe you are intending.  However, your image of life being like “roses red” is really quite nice and I do so appreciate the emotion and energy that went in to creating your poem.  Your friend in poetry, Susan