Reply To: Morning : Mourning of darkness

[Susan Katz]

This is a very thoughtful and well conceived poem.  I think it would benefit from editing as, in poetry, less is more – and often there are many words that really don’t add anything to the meaning or rhythm of the poem.  I think you have some real talent and would love to see this poem again, after you’ve had a chance to edit it, if that is something that you are willing to do.  It is too long for my current request for 2 to 4, un-rhymed poems, using imagery.  However, if you do resubmit an edited version, I will be happy to consider it for featuring on my poetladykatz Instagram page, at some future date.  Write on!  Your friend in poetry, Susan