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Susan Katz
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There are some very strong images in your poem.  I particularly liked “Till your begging to be released from the prison of my mind/out in the form of beautiful words.”  I also very much like “the thunder of your footfall.”  I’m a little less sure of “chock-full” as it somehow seems out of place.  Well conceived, well written, emotionally charged poem!  Thank you so much for sharing with me.  I will definitely consider your poem to be featured in a future poetladykatz Instagram post.  Your friend in poetry, Susan