Reply To: Imagery ( Beauty)

[Susan Katz]

Lovely!  You have truly captured the essence of the assignment – a two line poem, using imagery, that describes a feeling.  I can feel the love and I can feel the passion.  If I may, and this is just a suggestion, the word “make” does not work grammatically – “turn” is far more accurate.  Just a thought.  I will definitely, whether you edit or not, be featuring your poem in a future Instagram poetladykatz post.  Thanks you so much for sharing.  Your friend in poetry, Susan