Reply To: Darkness

[Susan Katz]

Thank you so much for submitting your poem for consideration for Featured Poem of the Month for December.  I very much like the way the mood builds in your poem and how you create a sense of “darkness” that takes us on a dramatic journey.  I also think you did a great job with your ending stanza – the “slant” rhyme at the end, works really well.  Good job.

Your friend in poetry,

Susan