Reply To: He who was born with silver spoon!

[Susan Katz]

Thanks so much for sharing your poem with me.  There are some very strong moments and the poem carries a singular tone throughout, which I like very much.  I believe your poem would benefit from some thought to correcting grammar and tenses but, overall, I think you have written a fine poem, filled with emotion and truth.  Speaking your truth, is what poetry is all about.  Your friend in Poetry, Susan