Reply To: Life. An endless strip of road

[Susan Katz]

Sorry for the delay in responding to your submission.  The holidays really mess up schedules!

Your poem is truly well written and creates a mood and expresses your feelings through some lovely images.  I would suggest that “beath” be replaced by simply saying “by”  “If by a blade…” for example.  I know you are going for a classical touch, but not sure it works with that particular word.

Really good job – well written – and captures the imagination.  Write on –

Susan