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Susan Katz
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Thank you so much for sharing your poetry with me.  I will respond to each poem, individually.  There are some lovely moments in this poem and, the intensity of your message shines through.  Just a couple of things to consider… in poetry, “less is more” and, simple words seem to work better than “grand” ones.  Having said that, I feel the emotion and I am moved by your words.  – Susan