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I really like this poem. I like the message. I like the way you “spin” your story through a series of beautifully crafted images: “…
sometimes she blotted them grey
her tears kissed the earth
leaving behind her scent and bow
people called it rain…”
Each of your images works and creates a beautiful “picture” for us, a lovely reality that we can connect with (sunset, rain, sunrise, night sky) – well done. I would like to feature this poem in my “Poem of the Week” section, in about three weeks. Let me know if that would work for you. I have been working on a poem and newsletter that deals with “The People I Love” – and I think this poem would fit beautifully into that theme.
Thank you so much for sharing this lovely poem with me,
Susan

