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#Rhyme is fine – just not all the time!
Wander, wander, in search of truth
Coming closer to the sea,
While waves that slip and sweep away
Clears my memories, mindless moves,
Drawing together from shore to shore
Calming all along, I’m here to stay!
Very nice. I will feature your edited poem in a future poetladykatz Instagram post. I’m impressed with how you reconsidered your poem and brought your thoughts and your message together in a lovey, lyrical way. – Susan