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    Candice
    Participant

    Wander

    #Rhyme is fine – just not all the time!

    Wander, wander, in search of truth

    Coming closer to the sea,

    While waves that slip and sweep away

    Clears my memories, mindless moves,

    Drawing together from shore to shore

    Calming all along, I’m here to stay!

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    Susan Katz
    Keymaster

    Very nice.  I will feature your edited poem in a future poetladykatz Instagram post.  I’m impressed with how you reconsidered your poem and brought your thoughts and your message together in a lovey, lyrical way.   – Susan

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