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  • August 3, 2021 at 4:26 am #17981
    Akanksha
    Participant

    Mist and the frost
    Rustling leaves
    Birds are awake,
    Chirping and flying again
    A tree alone
    In a huge forest
    Afraid of making friends
    Afraid of the evil
    The world contains
    The earth that shakes
    A small tree
    In a huge forest
    A pitiful scenery
    Describes the pain

    – Akanksha Modi
    August 3, 2021 at 9:57 am #18625
    Susan Katz
    Keymaster

    Thank you so much for sharing this very well written and very well thought out, poem.  I truly like your images and am touched by them – “the lone tree in the forest – “afraid of making friends” – “mist and frost – rustling leaves” all create a sensory journey that we may take with you, through your poem.  Nicely done.  Your friend in poetry, Susan

    August 3, 2021 at 2:22 pm #18628
    Susan Katz
    Keymaster

    Just to let you know, I have chosen your poem to be featured on my Instagram page, next week. In order for us to tag you on Instagram, you need to send us your Instagram name.

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