Awake,Alone, Afraid

[Akanksha]

Mist and the frost
Rustling leaves
Birds are awake,
Chirping and flying again
A tree alone
In a huge forest
Afraid of making friends
Afraid of the evil
The world contains
The earth that shakes
A small tree
In a huge forest
A pitiful scenery
Describes the pain

– Akanksha Modi

[Susan Katz]

Thank you so much for sharing this very well written and very well thought out, poem.  I truly like your images and am touched by them – “the lone tree in the forest – “afraid of making friends” – “mist and frost – rustling leaves” all create a sensory journey that we may take with you, through your poem.  Nicely done.  Your friend in poetry, Susan

[Susan Katz]

Just to let you know, I have chosen your poem to be featured on my Instagram page, next week. In order for us to tag you on Instagram, you need to send us your Instagram name.

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