Poetry Talk

Once again, I very much enjoyed reading your poem.  There is passion and purpose in your lines and many of them give us a “visual” view of the pictures you are trying to paint with words. I would suggest that you think of words in a poem as very precious and only use those that are absolutely necessary to the rhythmic and intellectual journey you want to take the reader on.  In poetry, less is more!  I do appreciate you sharing your work with me, Susan