Poetry Talk

This is really a very lovely poem.  Your imagery is intriguing and invites the reader in to the poem in a meaningful way.  There are a few places where the grammar needs to be addressed – for example: the tense should be “confined” not “confines” – “enclosed in (an) envelope of trust…” – “Amidst (take out “of”) the caravan of time…”  Really a very lovely, very well written poem – you should be very proud of it.  Thank you so much for sharing it with me.  I hope, at some future date, to be able to feature it on one of my Instagram posts.  Your friend in poetry,  Susan