This is really a very lovely poem. Your imagery is intriguing and invites the reader in to the poem in a meaningful way. There are a few places where the grammar needs to be addressed – for example: the tense should be “confined” not “confines” – “enclosed in (an) envelope of trust…” – “Amidst (take out “of”) the caravan of time…” Really a very lovely, very well written poem – you should be very proud of it. Thank you so much for sharing it with me. I hope, at some future date, to be able to feature it on one of my Instagram posts. Your friend in poetry, Susan
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