Poetry Talk

I particularly like your title “Burying Anger in a Distant Grave” – that is powerful, intriguing, and certainly poetic!  I am impressed by the tone and emotion of your short, imagery-inspired poem.  I’m wondering if it isn’t “if your world like a glass” rather than “glass like world” – that confuses me just a bit.  Also, we don’t “carve” glass so much as we create or recreate it.  I wonder if you would be willing to work a bit more on this very meaningful poem, and resubmit it.  I think it has great possibility.  Your Friend in Poetry, Susan