I particularly like your title “Burying Anger in a Distant Grave” – that is powerful, intriguing, and certainly poetic! I am impressed by the tone and emotion of your short, imagery-inspired poem. I’m wondering if it isn’t “if your world like a glass” rather than “glass like world” – that confuses me just a bit. Also, we don’t “carve” glass so much as we create or recreate it. I wonder if you would be willing to work a bit more on this very meaningful poem, and resubmit it. I think it has great possibility. Your Friend in Poetry, Susan
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