Poetry Talk

Thank you for sharing your work with me.  I feel the emotion but I am “hearing” it – being told it – rather than having you show me, through imagery.  “Nice” as what – an image for “hate” – an image for “tears rolling down your face”…  You have all you need to create a very meaningful poem, just take the time to read a few contemporary poems and poets, and apply the techniques of poetry to your poem.  I would be happy to see it again, after you have had a chance to work on it.