Yeah! I misunderstood that You will be mine always If you don’t like me Than why are you so nice to me You know that i can’t even resist it Yeah! I misunderstood this You only mean to me But if you hate me I am glad with it You see my face Even tears roll down on it I will smile doesn’t matter Who you are in love with.
Thank you for sharing your work with me. I feel the emotion but I am “hearing” it – being told it – rather than having you show me, through imagery. “Nice” as what – an image for “hate” – an image for “tears rolling down your face”… You have all you need to create a very meaningful poem, just take the time to read a few contemporary poems and poets, and apply the techniques of poetry to your poem. I would be happy to see it again, after you have had a chance to work on it.
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