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August 1, 2021 at 9:39 am
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Keymaster
Very nice – concise and meaningful. I’m a little confused, however, by your last line – “…when pen divulges the paper.” I’m not sure “divulge” is the right word. “Deluge” meaning to “flood” the paper might be more appropriate. Just a thought. Thank you so very much for sharing your work with me. Your friend in poetry, Susan

