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Susan Katz
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Very nice – concise and meaningful.  I’m a little confused, however, by your last line – “…when pen divulges the paper.”  I’m not sure “divulge” is the right word.  “Deluge” meaning to “flood” the paper might be more appropriate.  Just a thought.  Thank you so very much for sharing your work with me.  Your friend in poetry, Susan