Poetry Talk

Very nice. Please forgive the delay in my response – dealing with a fracture in my back making time at the computer difficult. Hoping to put this all behind me soon. In the meantime – good job. See below for just a couple more suggestions… And do send more when you get the chance – I would love to read your work, Susan

Dreams

a part of living
fantasy fused with reality (fusing with reality)
thoughts igniting reverie forming
imagery in my mind (images in my mind)
they make ordinary things (making ordinary things)
shine I look in wonder
and put pen to paper (don't need the "and")
illuminating
colorful, vanishing vapors slipping (colors instead of "coloring"?)
away on a string (Love your ending!)
of dreams…