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Susan Katz
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I am responding here to your latest poem as I need you to submit it, as you did with the others, with a title, in order to respond here. I did receive it in my email but cannot respond to you by email as I do not have your address.

It is another powerful poem – I'm not sure, however, I'm sold on the usage of "mine" (twice) at the end. Just a thought…