New reply from Susan Katz
<p>Lovely poem – with a classical feel to it. Your language and syntax, all suggest you are a fan (and scholar) of classic poetry. Thank you so much for sharing and for submitting your poem for consideration for Featured Poem of the Month. – Susan</p>
https://poetladykatz.com/poetry-talk/the-sky-connects-us-the-mountains-veil
Original Post by JALA
THE SKY CONNECTS US, THE MOUNTAINS VEIL. – JWALIT (JALA) PANCHAL
<p>The sky connects us, the mountains they</p>
<p>veil,</p>
<p>that which fills my heart, and my tongue seldom</p>
<p>reveals;</p>
<p>but nature is an ally, in all its forms, as it</p>
<p>produces-</p>
<p>the bird-chirrups, the summer-bees spell my heart’s</p>
<p>music.</p>
<p> </p>
<p>So, lass! listen keen, midst their buzz, betwixt their</p>
<p>flaps,</p>
<p>or even in the trembling leaves, passing breeze you can</p>
<p>grasp-</p>
<p>in what two birds, they converse, sitting on a bright</p>
<p>perch</p>
<p>you will find there, the words for my hearty</p>
<p>touch.</p>
<p> </p>
<p>So, lass! close thine eyes, and come closer, they will</p>
<p>whisper,</p>
<p>for the tongue of nature is, than a man’s, much</p>
<p>crisper;</p>
<p>so, the subject that fills my heart, and my tongue seldom</p>
<p>reveals</p>
<p>is contained in this sky, in these mountain-slopes that</p>
<p>veil.</p>