New reply from Susan Katz
<p>Thank you for submitting your poem for consideration for Featured Poem of the Month. There is an almost "painful – frantic" rhythm to the poem that adds to the message and the drama. I very much appreciate you sharing your poem with me, Susan</p>
https://poetladykatz.com/poetry-talk/think
Original Post by Captured.0519
THINK
<p>In and out <br />In and out<br />Im gasping for breath<br />Im gasping for real bond</p>
<p>With societal burden <br />With society expectations<br />Im bleeding my lungs out</p>
<p>Stop . no just stop<br />With your fake concern<br />With shallow words<br />With sugar coated laughs</p>
<p>Which come either too late<br />Or never .<br />Fan hanging there<br />Giving me thoughts</p>
<p>Blades lying there <br />Showing me <br />Beauty of red</p>
<p>Heights , once giving serienty<br />Showing the path of <br />Utter numbness</p>
<p>Pills – pain relieving<br />Is selling me up relief all my soreness</p>
<p>THINKING about , about loss , pain <br />Think about happy moments too<br />About moments of happy candid photos <br />Think about next day<br />A day with new hope<br />New start <br />Think about one step<br />Think about one step at time</p>
<p>-bhumi jain<br /><br /></p>
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