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Darling Just Stay Strong — Tejasianaa

<div dir="auto"><b><i>Can't you see those tears, there're</i></b><b><i> slippin' down,</i></b></div>
<div dir="auto"><b><i>Remember those days when</i></b><b><i> you wore a crown,</i></b></div>
<div dir="auto"><b><i>I couldn't hold you, could</i></b><b><i> just see you drown</i></b></div>
<div dir="auto"><b><i>Forgotten that you were the reason, people</i></b><b><i> saw this lit up town.</i></b></div>
<div dir="auto"><b><i> </i></b></div>
<div dir="auto"><b><i>It would've been so tough,cause breathing</i></b><b><i> air is just not enough.</i></b></div>
<div dir="auto"><b><i>The world is a place rough, where</i></b><b><i> you said "I'm fine" with a bluff.</i></b></div>
<div dir="auto"><b><i> </i></b></div>
<div dir="auto"><b><i>Darling just stay strong</i></b></div>
<div dir="auto"><b><i>cause one day you'll beat this storm</i></b></div>
<div dir="auto"><b><i>remember that you embrace this dorm</i></b></div>
<div dir="auto"><b><i>all these strikes are a norm.</i></b></div>
<div dir="auto"><b><i> </i></b></div>
<div dir="auto"><b><i>Forget all those fears,cause this</i></b><b><i> ain't a ghost town,</i></b></div>
<div dir="auto"><b><i>It's okay to be scared, as</i></b><b><i> every being has a nervous breakdown,</i></b></div>
<div dir="auto"><b><i>Didn't you wish for, the</i></b><b><i> stars to align for a crackdown,</i></b></div>
<div dir="auto"><b><i>Turn this all around, gearing</i></b><b><i> you up for a knockdown.</i></b></div>
<div dir="auto"><b><i> </i></b></div>
<div dir="auto"><b><i>You think you made a muff,while others</i></b><b><i> are churning out the fluff.</i></b></div>
<div dir="auto"><b><i>It was never about sweating the small stuff, when</i></b><b><i> you said "I'm okay" with a bluff.</i></b></div>
<div dir="auto"><b><i> </i></b></div>
<div dir="auto"><b><i>Darling you stood strong</i></b></div>
<div dir="auto"><b><i>cause today you beat this storm</i></b></div>
<div dir="auto"><b><i>remember that you embraced this dorm</i></b></div>
<div dir="auto"><b><i>all those strikes were a norm.</i></b></div>
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<div dir="auto"><em>— Name : Aditi Pal (Pen Name : Tejasianaa)</em></div>
<div dir="auto">— Email address : tejasianaa@gmail.com</div>

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<p>I love the way you've used your vocabulary. Good efforts!</p>