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HE ! – by Yukti Ukani

<p style="text-align: center;">He has fears ,<br />He makes them wings !</p>
<p style="text-align: center;">With the soft sides ;<br />He loves miniature things .<br />The way he smiles is the best parts of he <br />He knew to perform <br />Each day he lived .</p>
<p style="text-align: center;">He stares wth perspectives .<br />[The more day he shines ,<br />the more he drives ]<br />Sometimes an offensive <br />He holds his affections tight .</p>
<p style="text-align: center;">He's never a fancy ; rather he styles <br />Is he right over kind ,<br />Maybe he is twilight over wine !</p>
<p style="text-align: center;">He gathers courage .<br />He gives birth to dreams .<br />He gets to cry & comes up wth a prolonged fly .<br />He builds what he feels & helps who need .<br />He is fierce but its hidden inside .<br />He seeks it out for a misdeed .<br />He is grown up .</p>
<p style="text-align: center;">Now known as someone's HIS !<br />Journey shares within both <br />Empty voids of HIS heart <br />She fills it all ,</p>
<p style="text-align: center;">{They adjusted often <br />wth the manual fights }<br />Everything sorted with the core lights .<br />He becoming HIS .<br />[With motives , he achieves <br />He attempted , he failed]<br />Along wth brave heart<br />Never she complained .</p>
<p style="text-align: center;">Alwys he need ,<br />She never fails to believe .<br />That's ever he wished for ;<br />He is a gentleman ; wth dignity more !</p>

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<p>Thank you so much for sharing this very heartfelt poem with me and submitting it for consideration for Featured Poem of the Month, for June.  It is always so rewarding to write poetry and particularly, poetry that is meaningful.  I appreciate you sharing your poetry with me, Susan</p>