New reply from Susan Katz
<p>What a happy, upbeat, and positive poem you've written. Using Robert Frost's line from his poem, The Road Less Traveled, was a nice touch. And that rhyme, right there at the end, really works. Your poem could benefit from grammatical corrections but, I do thank you so very much for sharing it with me. I always enjoy a "success" story, in poetic form. Your friend in poetry, Susan</p>
https://poetladykatz.com/poetry-talk/adorable-adventure-success
Original Post by thejassleenkaur
Adorable adventure (success)
<p style="text-align: right;">An adorable adventure of my life was …</p>
<p style="text-align: right;"><span style="font-size: 1.4em;">One of the unpredictable story of my life . .</span></p>
<p style="text-align: right;"><span style="font-size: 1.4em;">The road of my life was full of obstacles and circumstances. .</span></p>
<p style="text-align: right;"><span style="font-size: 1.4em;">I got a path that was full of new chances…</span></p>
<p style="text-align: right;"><span style="font-size: 1.4em;">A new beginning of the life was started …</span></p>
<p style="text-align: right;"><span style="font-size: 1.4em;"> I got a potential ..to be independent and kind-hearted </span></p>
<p style="text-align: right;"><span style="font-size: 1.4em;">Suddenly the path diverged into new paths </span></p>
<p style="text-align: right;"><span style="font-size: 1.4em;">By closing my eyes and taking a deep breath ,,,I decided to choose the path that was travelled less</span></p>
<p style="text-align: right;"><span style="font-size: 1.4em;">And the result was ….I got SUCCESS….</span></p>
<p>This belongs to everyone because everyone has to face many obstacles to get success and I am one of them but always remember one thing only HARDWORK leads to success….</p>