New reply from Susan Katz
<p>Thank you so much for submitting your lyrical love-song poem for consideration for Featured Poem of the Month for July. You have some very lovely lines in your poem. I particularly liked, "<em><strong>Her giggles resonated rhythmically like the tinkling of the bells</strong></em>" and "<strong><em>With a gentle hold of her chin, he tucked a strand of hair behind her ear, to see thousands of emotions reflecting in her eyes.</em></strong>" – Susan</p>
https://poetladykatz.com/poetry-talk/aiswariya-mohanty
Original Post by Krishnashriya
Aiswariya Mohanty
<p><strong><em>Love in The Lap of Serenity<span style="font-size: 27.44px;">…</span></em></strong></p>
<p><strong><em>Walking through the woods, as the chilly wind meandered through her strands, mesmerised was he, to see her</em></strong> <strong><em>alluring beauty,</em></strong></p>
<p><strong><em>With their fingers intertwined, they kept walking deeper and deeper into the forest, as the trees kept swaying with a rhythm of their own,</em></strong></p>
<p><strong><em>With a gentle hold of her chin, he tucked a strand of hair behind her ear, to see thousands of emotions reflecting in her eyes.</em></strong></p>
<p><strong><em>Lost in the woods were they, totally engulfed in each other’s love, far from the chaotic world,</em></strong></p>
<p><strong><em>And as her twinkling eyes looked into his, he held onto her waist ever so lovingly,</em></strong></p>
<p><strong><em>With a glint of mischief in her eyes, she pushed him and escaped from his embrace, making him chuckle at her</em></strong><em><strong>playfulness,</strong></em></p>
<p><strong><em>Letting her go, he kept staring at her, admiring her beautiful form shimmering in the moonlight,</em></strong></p>
<p><em><strong>Her giggles resonated rhythmically like the tinkling of the bells, thus brimming his heart with immense love and adoration for her,</strong></em></p>
<p><strong><em>Chasing her along the river bank, with her melodious laughter filling up the atmosphere, he got twirled her arou</em></strong><em><strong>nd as he caught hold of her waist,</strong></em></p>
<p><strong><em>How happy and ecstatic was she, for being in her love’s arms, as he kept whispering sweet nothings to her, thus making her laugh rapturously,</em></strong></p>
<p><em><strong>Gently clasping each other’s hand, they sat by the river bank, with serenity abound in their </strong></em><strong><em>gentle</em></strong> <strong><em>hold,</em></strong></p>
<p><strong><em>“Will you love me like this forever?”, she whispered.</em></strong></p>
<p><strong><em>Taking her in his warm embrace, “Forever!”, he whispered back, his voice laced with utmost love and sincerity.</em></strong></p>
<p><strong><em>– Krishnashriya</em></strong></p>