New reply from Susan Katz
<p>Very nice! Just one suggestion – you don't need the "a" before the word "gold." There is love and kindness and a quiet, healing joy in this very brief poem and I like it very much. I will definitely consider it for featuring on my poetladykatz Instagram page, in the next two weeks. Your friend in poetry, Susan</p>
https://poetladykatz.com/poetry-talk/beautiful-soul
Original Post by shwetamahani
Beautiful soul
<p><em>Show me your soul</em></p>
<p><em>The damaged part of your soul</em></p>
<p><em>I'll try my best to show you</em></p>
<p><em>How it still shines like a gold !</em></p>
<p><em>-Shweta Mahani</em></p>
<p>shwetamahani340@gmail.com</p>
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