New reply from Susan Katz
<p>Well done! Short and to the point. While I would have liked to have an image for your "inner demons" rather than your telling me you have them, I think you have managed to convey some very strong feelings with just a very few words – and that is exactly what poetry is all about. I will feature your poem, within the next couple of weeks, on my Instagram page. Thank you so much for sharing, Susan</p>
https://poetladykatz.com/poetry-talk/defeat
Original Post by Svk86
Defeat
<p>I wrestle with my inner demons,</p>
<p>I stumble into the dark abyss</p>
<p>As my lungs fill with the pungent smell of defeat. </p>
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